Monday, May 16, 2005

Tsunami - A Pyramid Poem

A sea ninja
Slowlysucking energy
Waiting to attack Miami
Miami the town it still hates
It is still waiting - still thinking
Thinking of all the things they have said
Finally it attacks the town it really hates a lot
The people are so ashamed they don't talk ever again
by Damon Ansell


Blogger Jenny Feely said...

Dear Damon
I loved your poem particularly the image of the tsunami being a 'sea Ninja'. I had never seen a pyramid poem and really like it as an idea. Keep up the great writing

Best wishes
Jenny Feely
PS You might rememeber me. I used to teach at Reservoir East

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